Eminem, Poetry, and the Persona

Eminem lyrics are often discussed for their poetic merit, but fewer people mention how Eminem’s personas connect with those of modernist poetry.

Anyone familiar with Romantic poetry will know what strong personas the Romantic poets had. Lord Byron, John Keats, William Blake, William Wordsworth all wrote in a way that meant you could almost tell who wrote them, though clearly their poems’ speakers differ from the poets’ actual characters and personalities.

Romantic poets often depicted the poet as a hero or the poet as a prophetic, bringing spirituality, divinity, and the sublime in the aftermath of the Enlightenment’s science and logic.

The Modernist Persona

During the modernist era, however, poets started to take on different personas depending on the work. The persona of the speaker in T. S. Eliot’s The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock is similar to that of T. S. Eliot but also a lot different.

In The Waste Land, there are many speakers, and it’s unclear whether one speaker takes on different personas or whether these are actually different speakers. Each one of these personas differs, yet the poems were all written by the same prolific poet, T. S. Eliot.

Indeed, in modernism, there was actually a clear persona: the persona of having many personas.

Eminem’s Personas

When people discuss the legitimacy and reputation of rap music as an artistic genre, you’ll often hear the words “Eminem” and “poetry.” I’d say that it’s so common that it’s becoming somewhat of a cliche, so let me add my say! No modern poetry blog could surely be complete without the mention of Eminem, right?

The English author, Giles Foden, wrote in The Guardian about why he believes Eminem is a poet. Scott F. Parker dedicated an entire book, Eminem and Rap, Poetry, Race: Essays, that contains the topic of poetry, rap, and Eminem.

If that’s not enough for you, the Nobel Prize-winning poet and former professor of poetry at Oxford University, Seamus Heaney, praised Eminem’s lyrics. According to The Independent, The Poetry Society of London, formed in 1909, said it wasn’t surprised by Heaney’s remarks, adding that: “Eminem harnesses the power of word and language and that’s what a poet would do.”

A lesser known topic is that of Eminem’s personas. In the Fall 2019 edition of the Culture, Society and Masculinities academic journal, Anna Hickey-Moody labelled these personas as: “The Everyman, the Needy Man, the Hegemon.” She added that:

Eminem’s White/Black persona can be seen as interchanged with two lyrical alters-Marshall Mathers the everyman character and Slim Shady, the psychiatrically unwell and needy young man.

Anna Hickey-Moody, Eminem’s Lyrical Personae: The Everyman, the Needy Man, the Hegemon, Culture, Society and Masculinities, 2009

In 2002, Time magazine’s Josh Tyrangiel also described Eminem’s personas, as “The Three Faces of Eminem.” Eminem’s The Slim Shady LP and The Marshall Mathers LP created much controversy due to their explicit and violent nature, as well as their homophobia. He claimed that he was simply being an artist.

He was a guy named Marshall Mathers with a rap alter ego named Eminem, and that alter ego happened to have a lunatic doppelganger of its own named Slim Shady. He was merely playing a role (or three).

Josh Tyrangiel, The Three Faces Of Eminem, TIME, May 26, 2002

From my perspective, we can also break down Eminem’s persona’s like this:

Marshall Bruce Mathers III – That is the real man, and that is his legal name. This persona also features in some of Eminem’s music, as the lyrics are based on Mathers’s life. This persona is more humble, honest, and personal than the others.

One example is his famous 2002 song, Lose Yourself, from the movie 8 Mile. He won the 2003 Academy Award for Best Original Song wit this song:

Eminem – If you look at Mathers’ initials, you may notice something familiar: M and M, or Eminem. This persona is just a rapper, one that likens himself to a Rap God as in this 2013 song, clearly much less humble than the Mathers persona:

Slim Shady – This persona is the playful, naughty, dirty-minded one. He is more aggressive and offensive than the other two personas, bordering on the sociopathic. However, like Mather, he is at least brutally honest, saying in his 2002 song Without Me:

Though I’m not the first king of controversy
I am the worst thing since Elvis Presley
To do black music so selfishly
And use it to get myself wealthy

Source: LyricFind
Songwriters: Anne Jennifer Dudley / Jeffrey Irwin Bass / Kevin Dean Bell / Malcolm Robert Andrew McLaren / Marshall B Mathers / Trevor Charles Horn
Without Me lyrics © Peermusic Publishing, Kobalt Music Publishing Ltd., BMG Rights Management, Reach Music Publishing

In the modern world, rhyme can often sound childish or funny, but those lyrics seem to do both. Yet they’re also honest, and I’m pretty sure a lot of people find them offensive.

Just like modernist poets created the trend of the persona of having many personas, Eminem takes on different characters depending on the tone of his lyrics and music.

In that sense, perhaps Eminem’s lyrics and personas work like T. S. Eliot’s objective correlative, “a set of objects, a situation, a chain of events which shall be the formula of that particular emotion.”

Poetry Foundation says: “There must be a positive connection between the emotion the poet is trying to express and the object, image, or situation in the poem that helps to convey that emotion to the reader.”

Clearly, the lyrics and music of Eminem’s different songs match his personas and the mood they intend to convey. In fact, scroll up and look at the thumbnails for each song, and you’ll immediately see these differences.

Also, let’s not forget that he also took on another persona as an actor in 8 Mile, but that’s expected. Then again, a musician having different personas when lyrics are a form of writing or a sort of poetry, should be expected too.

What About Our Personas?

We may see different personas in poets like Eliot and musicians like Eminem, but we all use personas all of the time, whether we’re famous or not. Oxford’s Lexico Dictionary defines persona in two ways:

– The aspect of someone’s character that is presented to or perceived by others.

– A role or character adopted by an author or an actor.

Persona, Oxford’s Lexico Dictionary

We behave one way among family members and even within our families we behave differently with our siblings and cousins than we do without grandparents. We behave another way with our friends and a different way with colleagues and another with acquaintances and people we barely know or don’t know at all like store workers.

And let’s not forget how our social media and other online personas differ much more than our real life ones. For example, when people from university add me on Facebook or Instagram, I often don’t recognize them because of the edits they’ve made to their profile photos.

So the next time someone says, “Be yourself,” you could say you’d rather, “Lose yourself,” or you could ask them, “Which yourself should I be?” Just like the persona of having many personas, your individualism is composed by the many individuals that make up who you are and how you act. And you already do that whether you realize it or not.

What Is Modernism?

I found this interesting video by Tom Nicholas explaining what modern, modernity, and modernism mean and how they differ. The video discusses both visual arts and literature. Although Nicholas doesn’t say much about literature, he does give a good overview of modernism in terms of its historical context.

Modernism: WTF? An introduction to Modernism in art and literature by Tom Nicholas

Intricacies of Marriage Explained in A 14 Word Poem

Marriage

So different, this man

And this woman:

A stream flowing

In a field.

William Carlos WilliamsMarriage

This early 20th-century imagist poem by Puerto Rican American poet, William Carlos Williams, explains marriage in such a simplistic but magical way. I’ve written about marriage and love in modernist poetry before here, namely Ezra Pound’s translation poem, The River-Merchant’s Wife: A Letter. Pound’s poem was not imagist, but it did reveal a deeply personal and intimate side of a wife’s love for her husband. But Williams’ poem does not mention emotions, and it’s only 14 words long. Yet it evokes strong sentiments in me, just like imagist poets intended.

Imagist poetry aspires to depict a specific moment in time in an exact location while still being universal enough to evoke a strong response in the reader. Imagism also emphasizes using the minimum number of words necessary to create meaning and elicit the reader’s emotions and intellect.

Pound described the masses of people in a metro station so succinctly in another imagist poem, In a Station of the Metro which I explained here. That poem is also 14 words like Williams’ Marriage. For comparison, Shakespeare’s famous Sonnet 18, “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?” contains 114 words, one hundred more than Pound’s and William’s poems. I felt a strong sense of individuality and confusion in a metro station a few weeks ago when I realized what Pound meant in saying “these faces” merge together in an almost ghost-like manner.

William’s Marriage seems like an eternal yet ephemeral moment. It’s eternal because it could apply to any marriage anywhere on earth at anytime, past, present, or future to any man and woman. But it’s ephemeral because so much could happen after the moment ends. And in fact, there isn’t really a sense of time in this poem. Are the two individuals getting married? Are they already married? Were they once married? None of it is clear. This poem is really meant to be perceived by the reader, and our interpretation of it could differ.

To me, the key in understanding this poem lies in “A stream flowing / In a field.” Is the stream supplying fresh water to the field? Why does the field surround the stream? What is the field? These questions don’t really matter to me.

When I first read Marriage I thought about how a stream often merges into a river, just as two people become one in a marriage. They’re somehow individuals as part of the stream but become one united stream on the river of life. That river eventually becomes an estuary, feeding the sea. So, the stream symbolizes the path this couple might take before they eventually die and become one with nature again in the sea, a mass of souls no longer suffering life’s struggles.

Streams represent water, a life-giving substance. Marriages give birth to children. Okay, around the time this poem was written in the first half of the 20th century, childbirth was mostly through marriage. In 2018, the Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD) says that, “On average across OECD countries, 40% of births occur outside of marriage.”

According to the U.S. Center for Disease Control and Prevention, only about 40% of 2017 births in the U.S. occurred outside of marriage. So even today, marriage is the most common way children are born. See Williams’ universality and near-timelessness yet?

The stream could also be fast or slow depending on the situation, revealing how the marriage could be stagnating, exciting, or somewhere in-between. The stream could become a river that flows through the turbulence of rapids, the troubles, the fights, the struggles of a healthy marriage. Or it could flow as a waterfall, perhaps representing an affair or another type of severe betrayal.

But streams and rivers can also separate, bifurcating to different routes and locations. This bifurcation could represent a couple’s divorce, with each going their own way toward entirely separate lives.

There’s also a sense of irony in Williams diction and phrasing. The man and woman are different yet amalgamate as a stream. A stream suggests movement, but the poem is stuck in an eternal time loop, a single moment.

Now, I probably shouldn’t have extended the stream image to a river, especially as even streams have forks, rapids, and waterfalls. Marriage also represents a fleeting moment in time, thus extending an analysis further makes less sense. But my analysis is what the poem evoked in me, and it seems to comply with what Williams wrote. Somewhat.

You see, the “stream flow in a field,” and William’s preposition choice here adds much meaning. The stream is flowing “in” rather than through “a field.” How can a stream flow in a field? Surely it must end somewhere, in this case probably feeding the field. And this is why I suggested my river analogy detracts from the poem’s meaning. Marriage depicts a moment in time, a solitary and somewhat generic event. Therefore, it doesn’t matter that the stream “must end somewhere,” as I just said. It will end, but not in this moment, just as the marriage will one day end, in death or in divorce.

Marriage reminded me of Snow Patrol’s Chasing Cars:

Snow Patrol – Chasing Cars

These lyrics stood out most:

  • “We’ll do it all / Everything / On our own,”
  • “If I lay here / If I just lay here / Would you lie with me and just forget the world?”
  • “Forget what we’re told / Before we get too old / Show me a garden that’s bursting into life”

The two people suggested in the poem, ambiguous like those in Marriage, are on the journey of life together. But one of them calls for a moment, “Would you lie with me and just forget the world?” to enjoy each other’s company and forget everything. That’s similar to how Williams places the couple from Marriage in a solitary moment with noting else described around them. That is apart from the field, like “a garden that’s bursting into life.” A fruiting, flowering, thriving garden requires water like that of a stream.

Despite the lack of time, this poem leads to a single conclusion that isn’t mentioned anywhere. People die. Obvious, I know. But this man and woman will one day die if they haven’t already. Their stream will stop one day. Maybe they divorced before that. Who knows? Marriage shows the future as undecided, the past as irrelevant. But it also reveals to us that moments of the present, whether big or small, ambiguous or detailed, really do matter, especially as those moments could end as quickly as it takes for you to read a momentous 14-line poem.

Image by StockSnap from Pixabay

Modernization and Modernity in Yerevan

I first visited Yerevan in 2010 and returned in 2014, which a relatively short time. But a lot changed over that brief period from a variety of angles based on modernization and modernity, including some aspects mentioned or implied by the famous French poet, Charles Baudelaire in “The Painter of Modern Life and Other Essays”.

Dandies, for instance, are noticeable in places like Northern Avenue and indoor shopping centers like Dalma Garden Mall and Yerevan Mall. These locations themselves signify a shift from traditional markets to Western-style malls, again a form of modernization. Except the dandies found here are mostly female unlike the males found in Baudelaire’s writing.

These women strut with class and confidence with a slight swagger to attract attention. They pose in coffee shops and on park benches with elegance, upright without a hint of rounded backs from slouching, appearing to observe the world pass by but in actuality attract attention due to their unique looks and poise. Some of their clothes appear expensive and thus of high quality. Others appear torn and tattered yet still pricey. Some women are immaculately groomed too, as one might expect with legs milkier white than the dairy inside their cappuccinos. Others appear almost Gothic and unkempt with their dark nails and lipstick, yet somehow that means they too are groomed.

Baudelaire says dandies have “a personal form of originality, within the external limits of social conventions” (p. 108). In Yerevan, many have different shades of dyed hair, and wear short dresses or skirts, revealing tops, tattered jeans, t-shirts with swear words printed on, and more. This kind of fashion is certainly an “opposition and revolt,” in this case against conservatism and traditions (p. 108).

This kind of fashion is certainly an “opposition and revolt,” in this case against conservatism and traditions (p. 108). When I first came to Yerevan in 2010, I do not remember this kind of dress.

In fact, I stuck out like a swollen leg wearing shorts at a time when few males did (I could count the number I saw on one hand). Now at university, I look odd for wearing jeans when most males I see are now wearing shorts. How times change!

It seems the dress code has become more open and socially acceptable and thus more modern as it has elsewhere in places like Europe. Though some of the older generation who reproach females for dressing in such ways might disagree.

In 2010, Northern Avenue was still under construction. What was there made me feel like I was in a European city, a great example of modernization. But then again, why? Why go the European route in terms of architecture when Armenian culture has its own distinct architectural cues that could have been used?

Indeed many new constructions are still being built to create “modern” buildings across Yerevan, but many locals describe them as “monstrosities” as they ruin the view of Ararat and the city too. In Research Methods we read Ter-Ghazaryan’s paper, “‘Civilizing the city center’: symbolic spaces and narratives of the nation in Yerevan’s post-Soviet landscape,” which explains the conflict between modernization and building a national identity through architecture, as well as between the political elite and residents.

This conflict is similar to that described by Baudelaire in describing how artists depict the new “in the dress of the past,” which in Yerevan’s case signifies the mentality of the historical reliance on and admiration of Europe. It also signifies internal conflicts on how the past should influence the future, which politicians view differently than citizens. Baudelaire implies one can gain inspiration from present and past, so the development of a new, modern, and distinctly Armenian architecture based on its unique past would make more sense in terms of modernizing the city (p. 107).

Indeed, a perfect example of this unity between new and old can be seen at Zvartnots Airport. When I arrived in 2010, the new airport was part-finished. The old airport with its Soviet influence had overdone its useful life, as its capacity, usability, lack of space, and style had become outdated.

When I left a few weeks later the check-in was in the old airport. But after the security I entered the newly built departures area. It was like I left the 1980s and teleported instantly into the 2010s.

I think that is a perfect example of the transformation and modernization Yerevan has undergone. When I returned to Armenia in 2014, everything was new. Unlike Dalma, Yerevan Mall, or Northern Avenue, the airport did not remind me of Dubai or Europe or the West. It was unique to me despite its European-style usability and contemporary style, because it somehow captures the warmth of Armenian hospitality representing past and present.

Baudelaire says, “He gazes at the landscape of the great city, landscapes of stone, now swathed in the mist, now struck in full face by the sun” (p. 105). To me, Baudelaire is revealing the contrast between old and new as Paris was being torn down (“the mist” that resembles the past) and reconstructed for the modern (the light of the “sun”).

In Yerevan, there is a mix of pre-Soviet, Soviet, and post-Soviet buildings. Cranes construct crude monstrosities with little or no architectural connection with other structures. Yet, buildings can look old outside but be entirely renovated inside, kind of like Yerevan and Armenia itself. Then again, many old buildings have air conditioning units hanging outside them as symbols of modernity.

Old green and white electric trolley buses have largely been replaced by modern, bright purple buses complete with air suspension and air-conditioning. Old and now pale Soviet cars converted into taxis attempt to shatter the space-time continuum by fighting over the same space of road as brand new white and shiny Yandex taxis with neither willing to yield. Some aspects modernize and some may never change.

Other technology has drastically changed Yerevan, however, like communication. In 2010, 3G was the fastest mobile connection and fiber optic connections were relatively new. Today, 4G is accessible from almost anywhere with fiber optic connections woven under the city and into almost all buildings.

My laptop’s WiFi currently shows 13 Ucom WiFi networks and thus fiber optic connections available. In 2015, public TV broadcasts switched from analogue to digital, a perfect symbol of modernization.

Armenian and Russian advertising can be seen everywhere while English branding, a sign of modernity in terms of tourism and globalization, has become more common too. The country’s largest supermarket chain, Yerevan City, uses its name pronounced in English though written with the Armenian alphabet, for example. Baudelaire’s fascination with the advertiser whom he calls an artist, M.G., leaves room for comparison with Yerevan’s advertising. Some is garish and appealing while others are bold and inspiring, almost works of art.

Then there’s trash collection too (when it used to happen). Old Soviet trucks that required manual filling by hand were replaced by modern trucks, some capable of lifting trash automatically through cranes to whisk them away. Then again, the old trash bins were solid metal that were replaced by cheap plastic garbage ones, signs of modernity yes, but not necessarily a good change. 

I find it fascinating how Baudelaire’s concepts and ideas of modernity and modernization can be seen in Yerevan today. When I visited Lisbon in 2018, I cannot see anywhere near as much resemblance, because it is has been mostly modernized and amalgamated with its past.

Yerevan is very much learning and adapting to how modernization can be achieved. The city still bears its Soviet roots. Much has been modernized from fashion to buildings to transportation, but large parts of the city still remain symbols of its Soviet past. Perhaps this article’s image reveals more than words can express. But to me, Yerevan is still in a transitory period toward modernization like that of Baudelaire’s Paris and its inhabitants.

Photo by Artak Petrosyan on Unsplash